2 New Conclusions

1) My first conclusion I am going to conclude with a prediction. I should try to have it follow with the events in my paper. I should not make any new points or ideas. I really like this technique because it gets the reader using their imagination a little bit. Thinking about what could possibly happen next for Jeremy.

Because of all the interesting events that have gone on around Jeremy all he could think about on his way home was what will happen next. Would this keep going on and on? What other crazy events are ahead of me today? Jeremy was very confused about what happened that day. He will never have another day like that ever again.

2)A warning based on the essays thesis. Try to explain all of the events very quickly and have a small warning about them. When people see warnings they imedietly start thinking about what would happen if you dont follow the warning.

Right when he arrived home Jeremy told all of his friends about what happened at the mall. He was so confused about everything he could barely talk about it but eventually he got it out. He told his friends to be aware and that all of the sins could come up at any time for anyone. You never know when they will hit you.